Comments : Keep Me Here

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Nice poem. The devotion was well portrayed and the love was felt throughout. I like how you kept referring back to how he kept you from cutting. Great work

    cheers. josh

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is realy good... Better than mine lol and im sorry he left you thats terrible.. Mine asked me to marry her