I still don't know what to say about this one...even after you explained it to me! Your love and concern for him surely shows in your words...and from that point of view it's a beautiful love poem. It's just difficult for me to comprehend some of those emotions since I've never been faced with this situation myself. To carry these types of fears deep inside each day must be a personal hell...and it does help me understand where much of your writing comes from now. Really makes me wonder what kind of a world my generation has created and left for yours :(
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