Comments : Loved in vain

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem. It had a great flow and i liked the formate. The word choice was awesome. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work , beautiful words,keep write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You have a talent, that is obvious.
    The flow throughout was flawless. and the wording was beautiful.
    such an amazing talent
    love Tara-Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Broken

    Omg. i love this piece so much. it's such an amazing piece and i can't get over how amazing it is...the floe was perfect and i really liked your rhyme scheme. this piece was just...one of the best i've read so far. and the last stanza was definitely my favorite. it had so much emotion, meaning, and passion all jumbled into one stanza. this piece is...perfect! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    It has a lot of emotion, debth, and flowed nicely. It captrued my attention well and kept it too.
    there is nothing bad i can say about your poem.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by True Love Never Dies

    I loved reading your poem. It was full of beautiful words said with meaning

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked the flow but in some parts I got lost in the idea of it all I had to read it twice but all and all a good poem Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    5/5 major kudos ciao -EME-

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Filled with emtoiton till the vey end, and a powerful write at that, sweet work keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    I tell it to the bleating flocks,
    ...To every stream and tree;
    And bless the hollow murmuring rocks
    ...For echoing back to me.

    BEAUTIFUL! that left me speechless for sure it touched me, deep words with a flow so amazing. loved it 5/5