by Brittany C
I loved this poem. It had a great flow and i liked the formate. The word choice was awesome. 5/5 |
by noha
Nice work , beautiful words,keep write 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
You have a talent, that is obvious. |
Omg. i love this piece so much. it's such an amazing piece and i can't get over how amazing it is...the floe was perfect and i really liked your rhyme scheme. this piece was just...one of the best i've read so far. and the last stanza was definitely my favorite. it had so much emotion, meaning, and passion all jumbled into one stanza. this piece is...perfect! 5/5 |
by sweet escape
It has a lot of emotion, debth, and flowed nicely. It captrued my attention well and kept it too. |
I loved reading your poem. It was full of beautiful words said with meaning |
by Robert
I really liked the flow but in some parts I got lost in the idea of it all I had to read it twice but all and all a good poem Plot121 |
by Jenna
5/5 major kudos ciao -EME- |
Filled with emtoiton till the vey end, and a powerful write at that, sweet work keep it up 5/5 |
by Alvaro
I tell it to the bleating flocks, |