Amazing... 5/5 left me speechless...

A very powerful piece the work was great and the images were vivid great job Plot121

She tells him to wait as she SITS up.... you put sites...
wow iliked this poem. you have a talent for describing sex and giving it just a hint of love. many people wouldnt dare write a poem like this for fear of what others would say. but when you write it yo write with a passion....
just fix that one line.... and i think it is great!