As i have the last words

by LOVEmeNOT   Mar 23, 2008


You had me at hello, and never once
Did you say good-bye. Everyday I knew
It was you who stood by my side. And with
No worries, with nothing to say, I let you
Take my breath away.

I told you everything, and sometimes twice.
You were the one for me. The one that never made me cry.
And even when I closed my eyes, I knew you
Would still be there.

But as days passed, you slowly just slipped away.
Along side me now, is the shadow you had
Once replaced. I just couldnt count the days anymore,
As you kept leaving my side. No longer did
I feel the love. And now was the first time I cried.

I cried without you, because you're the one that
Left my side. You left me alone and lifeless.
Actually thats just how it seemed to me.

I couldnt turn to you, so I had no clue in what to do.
Yet when you wanted, I was the one you ran to.
Gasping up my head that you would return.
When in reality it was just a show.

You would come and go as you pleased.
Leaving me up in the air. And when I realized
You were no longer for me. For once I had
No problem in hearing that news.

You had the first words. You were the first to
Say hello. But now as you come back to me, just for
This one time, I promise you the last words I say
Would be Good-bye.

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Ok well this poem is the first poem i written in awhile so it might be a little rusty. But please tell me how it is and what can be fixed =]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    I actually really like this piece. Its very cute and I can tell you really did put your true feelings out there:) Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica93

    YeAh!!! loved it!!!! i was like wow then i was like ahh then i was like im in love with this poem lol!! but it was great and not rusty at all girlie so keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aw. Nice poem. You written it so clearly, you dont have to change any of it. Very good for a first poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awwww, that was such a sweet poem! :] I love love loved it.

    You had me at hello, and never once
    Did you say good-bye.

    ^^ Hehe, I loved that cliche. :]