Awwww, that was such a sweet poem! :] I love love loved it.

You had me at hello, and never once
Did you say good-bye.

^^ Hehe, I loved that cliche. :]

Aw. Nice poem. You written it so clearly, you dont have to change any of it. Very good for a first poem. 5/5

YeAh!!! loved it!!!! i was like wow then i was like ahh then i was like im in love with this poem lol!! but it was great and not rusty at all girlie so keep up the good work.

I actually really like this piece. Its very cute and I can tell you really did put your true feelings out there:) Great job