"hidden brown eyes"
i loved that line. makes it mysterious. i think this would be a good song. the chorus part is super catchy, and with music it would be great. good job!

V1
so im thinking back to those three days
as i picture your smiling face
with those eyes
those hidden brown eyes
and i remember everything you said
the words just racing through my head
and it makes me wonder why were not together

- Love everything about that verse. Just use capitalization where necessary.

Chorus
and i guess i wanna see you means we cant meet again and i guess i would date you means that we should just be friends and yea im still into you but i guess thats where it ends cause i dont wanna hear if this then that

- Absolutely amazing. Maybe put this in stanza format? The word choice is brilliant though.

V2
now i know that youve got a new girl
and i realized ill never be your world
but im not mad
im not even mad
cause as i said if youre happy then im happy
and if shes what you want then ill let it be
and ill still be there for you
cause thats what friends do

-Not as good as the first, but still pretty good.

Chorus
now i know i wanna see you meant we cant meet again and i know i would date you meant that we should just be friends and yea im still into you but i guess this is where it ends cause i cant stand to hear if this then that

Really good.
I hope this does become a song, because I'd love to hear it. You've definitely got a lot of talent.
Keep it up.
5/5.

Hey this is really good.
i love it
keep it up