Comments : The end

  • 16 years ago

    by kaili

    Very well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats good, strong ending well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by jayson salvador

    Thanks. always good to get feedback.

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    I thought this was deep. written nicely.

    -keep it boss-

  • 16 years ago

    by cicek

    Good...very deep

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this...

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryce

    Amazing work,
    Good descriptions, i could tell the mood of this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxSimplyMexX

    Very deep but beautiful piece of work[[= 5/5.
    M.J.