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by Tara Kay
This is very well written, you have potential. I liked the set-up, its eye catching and the wording was very good. The flow wasnt perfect, but overall this was a very good piece of poetry, that i very much enjoyed.
by sweet escape
I like the meaning behind it but i dont like the way you have it set up. i give it a 4/5
by Michael D Nalley
This to me is a masterpiece of truth