Edit:
I could find nothing to correct so that's VERY good! :)

Good comments:
I enjoyed it. It was simple and understandable. You had no spelling, punctuation, grammar or capitalization errors. The topic was sweet and simple. You kept my attention and the consistency was great throughout the poem.

Work on comments:
Really, I didn't see anything you could work on. If you'd like you could experiment with punctuation marks but that's your own thing. That's the great thing about poetry. You can break the rules and make your own up along the way.

Rating:
I give this a five. It was a good poem with no errors and the consistency was nice.

I like this poem I can relate to it

I really like how you compared your life to hills. it was different and interesting in a really good way. its a different way to look at life and i like that alot. overall a sucsess with a really nice meaning. bravo. 6/5 ~KM~