A Sad Poem [For special person]

by Boy   Mar 23, 2008


Forgetting about you is so hard
I admit time is going so fast
Empty ways are my stay
You gone miles away

Forgetting about you is so hard
Seeing your lovely greeting cards
Keeping your memories in life
was hoping to see you, my wife

Cannot imagine coming tomorrow
My Present is full of sorrows
I still remember loving past
Forgetting about you is so hard

Impossible to begin new start
Standing alone at grave yard
Silently saying in my heart
Forgetting about you is so hard

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gizmo

    TITLE SHOULD BE FOR A SPECIAL PERSON.

    Forgetting about you is so hard.
    I admit time is going ToO fast.
    Empty ways are my stay,
    You ARE gone miles away.

    Forgetting about you is so hard.
    Seeing your lovely greeting cards.
    Keeping your memories in life
    was hoping to see you, my wife.

    Cannot imagine THE COMING OF tomorrow
    TODAY is full of sorrows
    I still remember MY loving past
    Forgetting about you is so hard

    Impossible to begin new start,
    Standing alone at THE grave yard.
    Silently saying in my heart,
    Forgetting about you is so hard.

    THIS WAS A TOUCHING POEM. IT IS VERY SAD. AGAIN YOU HAVE A FEW CHANGES TO DO BUT IT WAS VERY GOOD.

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Yeah , This poem has got rythm And I love poems with rythm , 'Forgetting about you is so hard ' ...wow just wow

    5/5
    Cheers
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by gabriella

    Hey i rly love thsi poem its soo inspiring i admire your dear patience and waiting fro the lvoe of your love. that character trait is soo amazing do not ever leave your hopes and dreams cause this one will benefit you greatly jsut keep on holding out u will find her 5/5 good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Yes, forgetting Love is very difficult...nearly...impossible... I know the feeling.. Your poem was beautifully written...Shortly my comment for this poem: Maash'Allah!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very interesting piece you penned here.
    A poem from the heart. 5/5