A very touchy poem. But i think u should move on towards life , i knw its hard to start new begining but u cant bring past back as past remains past and whtever u have is today.....so move on dear friend.
5/5
God bless u

Aww thats so sad, keep writing xx

To lose someone you love deeply inside sucks. Memories can haunt you for the rest of your life, but remembering the good times together and how your life would have been without them. This is what makes them a special part of you. Great poem.

Hassan
What a very sad piece you have penned.

Forgetting about you is so hard
Seeing your lovely greeting cards
Keeping your memories in life
was hoping to see you, my wife

I don't think we ever forget someone we love so much. Just keep reliving memories.

Cannot imagine coming tomorrow
My Present is full of sorrows
I still remember loving past
Forgetting about you is so hard

Days seem so long when we are without love. I hope you find peace in your heart soon.
Great job!
Take Care
Your friend Cindy

Here u go :) it's a good poem, though i wish you weren't so sad.. if there's something i can do, just tell me
x

Im sorry for your heartache, losing someone you love does burn a hole in your heart but fond memories recapture their spirit.

good poem 5/5
take care

Whoa ahmazing love it

Flows perfectly, words used are pretty interesting...The whole poem is absolutely stunning..The emotions are so intense...beautifully written yet you expressed extreme sadness..Its very touchin and i know for sure everyone can relate...Im sorry for your loss as mentioned by some above me...

Great Job..5/5

Waw its great A SAD POEM and it realy sad, i love the flow and the meaning of this poem and it also full of feeling of love and sorrow ,i realy can feel this as me too live the same thing ,well done if there is more than 5 i wil give you ,but its roles so 5/5

Wow, i love it. It is sooo deep good work! I really like the line

Forgetting about you is so hard
Seeing your lovely greeting cards

this is really very creative! good work!

I actually thought it was a really good poem, i just thought that your rhyming was a little odd in some places, but it was still very good.

"Forgetting about you is so hard
Seeing your lovely greeting cards"

FAvorite part ^^

I loved the flow of the whole poem

a well deserved 5/5

I think it should maybe be
"You're gone miles away" Instead of "you gone miles away..."

Other than that, I love the repeated motif of the line "forgetting you is so hard"

Thank you for the comments on my poems.

Greta xx

I liked it , but i think the ends of the first and second stanzas sound a little odd.

-Syn

Very interesting piece you penned here.
A poem from the heart. 5/5

Yes, forgetting Love is very difficult...nearly...impossible... I know the feeling.. Your poem was beautifully written...Shortly my comment for this poem: Maash'Allah!

Hey i rly love thsi poem its soo inspiring i admire your dear patience and waiting fro the lvoe of your love. that character trait is soo amazing do not ever leave your hopes and dreams cause this one will benefit you greatly jsut keep on holding out u will find her 5/5 good job

Yeah , This poem has got rythm And I love poems with rythm , 'Forgetting about you is so hard ' ...wow just wow

5/5
Cheers
Biya

TITLE SHOULD BE FOR A SPECIAL PERSON.

Forgetting about you is so hard.
I admit time is going ToO fast.
Empty ways are my stay,
You ARE gone miles away.

Forgetting about you is so hard.
Seeing your lovely greeting cards.
Keeping your memories in life
was hoping to see you, my wife.

Cannot imagine THE COMING OF tomorrow
TODAY is full of sorrows
I still remember MY loving past
Forgetting about you is so hard

Impossible to begin new start,
Standing alone at THE grave yard.
Silently saying in my heart,
Forgetting about you is so hard.

THIS WAS A TOUCHING POEM. IT IS VERY SAD. AGAIN YOU HAVE A FEW CHANGES TO DO BUT IT WAS VERY GOOD.