Let this light gide

by noha   Mar 23, 2008


Let this light guide
Where we thought lost
In a journey to find
How much a love cost
Like the turning tides
Sail upon song waves
In the fields lies
A soul that had saved
The mind wonders endlessly
Upon this question love
Close your eyes to find me
Follow the stars above
Where only a touch can feel
Into the unknown
Yet understand how real
And that I love you so
Listen to my whisper
How sweetly it sounds
This cold makes me shiver
Where warmth in you I found.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautifully written my dear. I loved the imagery you painted with your soft words because they truly took me into another world which was wonderful. The words you used here were effective in getting your message across so well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    You wrote very sweet and cute poem i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Splendid work... dark blue ocean.. keep writing such poemz..... (Best wishez 007)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree with all above, nice write. I enjoyed almost everyline. I can see your true emotion in the words. nice

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was a lovely poem, and beautifully written. I'm just not really a fan of love poems that are rather cliched, so I didn't absolutely enjoy the poem. However, it's still well-written.

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