Love is like growing tree

by noha   Mar 23, 2008


I dreamed of a love,
a love so true,
and then from above,
God sent you to me.

When our eyes met,
I turned away,
Only to regret,
That grateful day.

I search in the dark,
To find that key,
That triggers the spark,
You put in me.

I want you to see,
That my love is true,
Even though we can't be,
Love is like growing tree.

I LOVE YOU AMR AND I WANT OUR LOVE TO GET FREE

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  • 16 years ago

    by shadowknight

    OMG this was awesome, breathtaking and BEAutiful!

    It seems like it should be framed and on valentines cards.!.! (the good ones....)

    It really true and great!
    Good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I have to admit, I didn't really like the fact that it rhymed in some stanzas, and not the others. But overall, I liked it.

    "I search in the dark,
    to find the key
    That triggers the spark
    You put in me"

    ^^ BEST stanza out of the whole thing.

    Take care and keep writing.
    ~Lace

  • 16 years ago

    by BluEyedMemory

    While I enjoyed all your writing. This poem just was a little not there for me. I still think your a wonderful writer.
    Always
    Emma 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Hmm...This poem was okay, I really didn't like it very much though, even though it was pretty cute and sweet, it didn't have much of a flow at all, the poem started non-rhyming, then was rhyming, then was non-rhyming again. so 3/5 for me.
    ~gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I liked your write but would have dropped the "that's why" I dont think it fits and without it it seems to end that verse just fine.
    You put in me... thats why? keep up the nice writes

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