by khate
Nice work,.love it very much |
Very, very good, so much so, I've added it to my favorite poems list. It was intelligent, wise, deep, well written and...well, great. I don't know if I like the first or the second stanza the most, they're both equally brilliant. I love the second stanza for what's being said, and I love the first stanza for the same reason, as well as the way its put. |
by Darien
I like the rhetorical questions in this poem. My favourite one would be hate the player, not the game! lol!, sorry, I know this poem had a serious side to it. Society is strange. It will never be understood. But it's always good to question it. |