by Michael D Nalley Mar 23, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
On your mark get set go |
by Rachel RTVW
I liked the ending. Clever! |
Good. Not as good as the others, in my opinion, but still good. Once again it was well worded and it flowed nicely, but it just wasn't as deep as your others, it didn't have the same level of thought, I felt. |
by khate
I like the 2nd stanza,. |