by Michael D Nalley Mar 23, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
You say my meanness is so outrageous |
A good, flowing piece. Great message too. My favorite line was 'When you criticize my attitude too quick' and my favorite stanza was the first one, I wich I could say why for either, but the truth is I just don't know, sorry. |
Aww, heartfelt message in this poem. I enjoyed it. Well written and easy to read. |
by Sarah
Amazing poem, the rhymes were awesome! 5/5 |
by khate
Its great,.almost perfect, |