Its great,.almost perfect,

Amazing poem, the rhymes were awesome! 5/5

Aww, heartfelt message in this poem. I enjoyed it. Well written and easy to read.

Good job.

Greta xx

A good, flowing piece. Great message too. My favorite line was 'When you criticize my attitude too quick' and my favorite stanza was the first one, I wich I could say why for either, but the truth is I just don't know, sorry.

Brad