Wow very amazing
excellent descriptor words and u really personofied the earth brilliantly

5/5

keep it up

Amazing poem!
i love the way you put your words!
the way you stuctured your poem!
i like the meaning you are trying to send to the world, that we are all one, even though it takes a sun to prove that... (thats the meaning i got from the poem)
keep up the good writting!