Rain In Peace

by uppercase   Mar 23, 2008


Please let it rain, keep me from the smoldering earth, I'm waiting like the seeds of grass.
Let it rain in peace forever where I walk, whether you're there, or not.
I can't say I want you back by my side, but I can say I'm sorry for pushing you away from my path.
My own selfishness has devoured my sense of credibility. I can't cry, but I can see you smile.
It's all I ever wished for was for anyone to keep a smile and go toward they believe in
Please let it rain in peace, because I've been fighting a war that made the feeling of death creeping in my chest.
I can say that I have had harsh words I wanted to throw at you, but each dagger I threw at myself, and now I am praying for forgiveness.
The best part is that you can keep a smile on your face, keeping hope and all I have is felt sorry for how bad I thought you treated me
You're impossible to find, through the clouds, all I ask is for the rain, I'll walk forward and you can come along if it pleases you.
I have failed, and todays the day that I fall on my knees and scream for the rain, because the rain was the only thing that brought us together
It's a little too late for I'm sorry but, it's not too late to feel the guilt that I carry on my back, either way I can't breathe.
Maybe we're better off this way, separate paths, maybe it'll join back together, but maybe today it will rain in peace.
I've done my wrongs, so have you and some things won't be forgiven, but today we're not fighting, and that is what matters.
We're not fighting, we're not fighting...but I'm losing, for what ever there is to lose, I've defiantly lost it.
I know I broke all my promises to you, but I promise not to make anymore of those promises.
You make it hard to smile, and you make it hard to breathe, only because I'm struggling just to look at how faithful you are.
Let it rain in peace, today let my white flag be the last flag waved, if you comply, I promise, I promise
It will rain in peace.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

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  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This one was kinda stirring me away.
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