Who's going to?

by StandStill   Mar 23, 2008


Who will save me
when i'm drowning in the rain
Who will save me
when i can't take the pain
Who's going to
brighten my day
Who's going to
lighten my way
Who's going to help
the lost little soul
Who's going to find
the diamond in the coal

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    I will help you! :)
    Really good poem! 5/5 from me :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    The poem has so many questions, but no answers, it was really good, but you need to fix it up even more

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    I really like that!

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Speakin of diamonds, NOT PENNIES, great poem, highfive, i love the drowning in the rain, ;) i swear gabby i dont know how u manage to make so many poems, i really dont, 302. wow

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