Awesome,..love it ^_^,5/5

"this is my life
played in a minor key
each measure too delicate
ill brake, ill bleed"
^^^
Amazing, so powerful stanza.

Whole poem is greatly written, filled with fantastically expressed emotions. I've always liked your poetry very much- your descriptions are absolutely flawless, very beautiful. This piece is also very touching, heartfelt from the first to the last line.
Greatly done.
5/5 from me

First of all, the way you wrote this poem is very, very hard to read, it would be much easier if you wrote it in stanzas, or if at least you did not make a lot of free space between every line.
But (except that it was hard to read this) I enjoyed so much in each line! You expressed so strong emotions and truly painted a vivid pictures in my mind, totally original work. Well done, few lines are simply fascinating and all in all excellently written.

I must say this poem is even more amazing now, wow!

Excellent job. I like how your writing flows so well and its very meaningful