Comments : Brief History of Drowning (part 2)

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I like the last words at the bottom of these....very you.

    I can't tell if my heart is broken
    Or if it was ever intact

    ^ wish i didn't' understand this..

    once again, great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Ur latest poems have such away of hooking me! i find my self reading them over and over again, their like aticting! ur really geting better wit every poem, even tho ur already like amazing! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~