by Bree Mar 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The walls have been caved, |
by tamara
This was quite different to alot of your other poems but i liked it just as much. its such a sad poem but so descriptive i can see the house and little girl so clearly in my mind and thats because you write so well. |
This was a very touching piece. Its ashame that people so inocent are born into homes like this. I personally don't live like this but I'm sure that other teens out there who do would really appreciate what you have written. Another great poem. keep it up. 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats great, you wrote this so well. 5/5 x |