Thats great, you wrote this so well. 5/5 x

This was a very touching piece. Its ashame that people so inocent are born into homes like this. I personally don't live like this but I'm sure that other teens out there who do would really appreciate what you have written. Another great poem. keep it up. 5/5
kat

This was quite different to alot of your other poems but i liked it just as much. its such a sad poem but so descriptive i can see the house and little girl so clearly in my mind and thats because you write so well.

another great poem you should be proud of yourself