Wow what an amazing poem, with so much tragedy. It really made me think and i have goosebumps all over. You are a fantastic poet and your going straight on my favourite list well done!

great poem, it really put things into perspective, for me at least, keep it up

that was really good and really sad. I hope u keep writing because i love reading your poems.
Analiese

that was really good and really sad. I hope u keep writing because i love reading your poems. (5)
Analiese

That was a realy sad story...wow...Beautifully written...

so sad =( poem ended wif such a tragic ending... but all in all i wrote that one so neat and tyte... hope u can visit mine... ciao

wow that is so true..not the story but the main part of it...so many kids feel this way and do crazy things....very good writing...keep it up!!!

OMG that was great, i had tears i my eyes. that was a brilliant poem. i wish i could write as well as you. keep it up. i thought that was a super poem!!!

great job!

great job!

this was the BEST poem i have read in a long time

Wow!
Man Amy you have a really good talent! I really wish I could write like you! This poem had really touched me alot! I have been doing studies and papers on the Columbine High School Shooting in Colorado on April 20th, 1999. Your poem showed what really happens in schools! I just wish you the best of luck with your writing! I believe i will def. get ou far in life!!! Thanks for writing this poem! And hope to read more of yours soon! Lots Of Love!!!

-Carrie-

That was really sad!! I love it!

Keep Writting!!!

hey thanks everyone and yes i did write this..it was about a story i saw on the news a couple of years ago.

brilliant poem but sad loss.think of the gud times though.sorry.xx

this was great... reminds me of my life sort of but i dun think i would bring in a gun >,>... very well written... tells the story beautifly even though it is a sad 1....

wish i could write like that
~Tyler~