Those Bloody Angels

Your standing
On a cliff so high
On a world so darkened
In a numbly night
Slight moment in grace

Below, a city
With unforgettable dreams
Infinite memories
Sweet blood pictures
Hours of torture

Sadly, wallowing eyes
Drink deeply from the agony
A spark of ignition
Remember the past
Self inflicting pain

Raven's hair
Down the slender back
Of a once breathing girl
But now, pale skin slick
Does anyone see you?

Black dress torn
Tasseled thin
Shreds keep her dignity
And the cold, bitter night
Wraps around you bones

Blood seeps your back
Spine had been ripped out
Two broken wings lie
Where a human curve once lay
The sheer cries you make...

And you only wish
A Saviour will rescue me
And you wait, and wait
No one shows on that cliff
Do you feel the sadness?

A girl that's fallen
A woman broken
A heart needing mended
Those bloody angels
Tell me who will save them?

~I would really appreciate comments on this, cause I'm not sure if this is good or not :S lol x~