Adel,

It's hard to be angry at a creature as beautiful as your roommate...
But still, sweetheart you are too good to let
that person walk all over you. Reading your words leaves me feeling so sad...
*hugs you tight*

5/5 Ingrid

Too touchy dear ur words shows the pain u gone through and u really are a true friend as u never complain to him for such pain.
Everythg will be fine again.Hope for the best.
5/5

God bless u

Hey bro,

love it love it love, n it dznt have to look like a poem to be a poem, its enough that u expressed ur feelings

5/5 :)

ur fan
~gIrL~

Ya its not normal poem but its great too, i know this feeling sometimes hurt so much as it caused by someone too close ,and its hurt more if he or she dont know how much pain you feel, and you try to say its okay but inside this hurt can hide for long time,this happend and every one we know one day in a sec can be another,how you act?
did she answer ???
for me you cant avoide this and you can keep the hurt so if you told here and she still think its a joke tell here this joke hurt
and ask here not to do it again
great jop and i hope that i help you

Kicking you out of the house dosn't seem like a joke and would hurt me as well.

You have changed a lot
"I don't know when, why and how
All the fun that we used to have
There is nothing like that now

Days can pass by without talking to each other
Al though i tried to
We are roommates but
I don't know what happened to you"

I can relate to this. I know how it feels.. People change... It hurts when the changes is getting worse and worse.. And the person who was with us becomes a stranger...

Hey im sorry for all the pains ur goin through..

U kno im always one pm away..besides we both are in the same country haha..

Seriously, I know you overcome the pain, its nothin compare to the pain of you endlessly waitin for her..

Take care..5/5

Your words touches a poet's heart, You expressed very well.

Great poem [5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah A.

I know EXACTLY how you feel. its hard when a good friend drifts away. becomes somebody you can't understand and don't even know anymore. it's hard to deal with, i've been through it too. you just gotta stay strong and deal with the built up anger in a healthy way. i didn't deal with it in a healthy way and i ended up breaking off a lot of good friendships. well done. great emotions!!

Wow, what a poem

I know of pain from a friendship broken but to write those feelings down takes a lot of talent - which you certainly have.

In any poem simplicity and sincerity strilke out the most and you are so easily able to convey your deepest feelings and yet still talk through it in such a way that many people can feel your pain.

Apart from a few mistakes in the poem it was a well written one. Words may just be words and even though said in a joking manner they may still hurt the most but life goes on and you learn to forgive.