by jojo Mar 24, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
family
My bright blue eyes |
by Shinobi
This poem is touching. Your style in this poem made it easy to read and made the flow go smoothly. I liked the structure of this poem. The rhymes were also good and not forced. Nice job 5/5 |
by Alvaro
Another poem well penned you seem to know what you feel and i can tell the more you write the more you'll capture it your going to be a great writer i can tell.. loved it.. 5/5 |