by soccer beast Mar 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I wake up and sit up on my bed look at my phone and there are 24 messages and 13 missed calls look at all the messages and they say hope you are not dead, hope you are not dead, hope you are not dead ... there is one message at the beginning though that says i hope he makes it!!!!!! i then looked in front of me and i am in the hospital and my entire school almost is standing there looking at me i look at my girl friend kneeling beside me and asked her "where am i ???" she said i was biking at the skate park and i hit my head and was not saying a word... i looked at her and said I LOVE YOU!!! but i can not deal with the pain i feel right now so pull the plug i want to go to heaven! I LOVE YOU so much and i hate to let you see me die like this but it is for a reason. I LOVE YOU so i want to let you have my bike for you to remember me........ GOOD BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Omg. Brandon, I had no idea you could write like this. |
by Meaghan
That was a really good poem! I like your style of writing where you tell a story. It is similar to my type of writing. Great Job! |
by halie
Rlly good poem |
I thought it was cool. but if i was ur girlfriend i would slap u silly! |