Comments : MY LASt GOOD BYE!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    I thought it was cool. but if i was ur girlfriend i would slap u silly!

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Rlly good poem
    kinda sad but rlly good
    i loved it
    5/5
    most of my friends skate board and sorta do :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Meaghan

    That was a really good poem! I like your style of writing where you tell a story. It is similar to my type of writing. Great Job!
    5/5
    ~~Meaghan

  • 16 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    Omg. Brandon, I had no idea you could write like this.