This is definately a very heart-felt poem. The reader feels the pain your character is experienced as it is one that each and every human has at one point experienced, love and need. Greatly inspired, it does justice to the feeling of being vunerable and needing moral support. I liked it.

I would advise you, however, to avoid repetition so much as it steals away from the feeling in your poem. Sometimes a few less words can be more effective. Maybe try re-arranging your words to create stanzas?

A great read nonetheless.

Please have a read over my poetry and let me know what you think. :)

Natalie.

Heyy ...ur peom has really nice words , but i think you should things more clear , its kind in the middle confusing , but well done

I have definitely felt this way before.. keep writing!