So unique. Another great write from you. This is one of few poems I have nothing to suggest in the way of making it better. The flow was good as well as the message. Kudos points for you. 5/5

Ooooh, I loved how you actually made a recipe. Haha, I might need to actually try it and see if I go insane.

The only thing I can crtique is that I would have liked to have seen you put it in stanzas. When people don't do that it just looks messy for some reason. >< It's probably just me. Other than that I loved the uniqueness of this. Wonderful job.

Keep writing!
Cayce