This one was really good. i liked it.

What...

nd a little girl drowning
in a painless sort of way
a little girl dying
never again to see the light of day

floating alone
so cold and so dead
floating alone
in a sea bed

tucked into death
with a blanket of memory
and the starfish befriend her
oh, how friendly

those three stanzas.. holy wow you write so swift as if you know everything you see everything before you write it. you know what the next step is you know what to say its quite amazing