I liked how you set this up in the shower. It's like water is suppossed to cleanse, but it won't cleanse what and where you need to cleansed at and that's in your soul. I like how you said your tears are washed away, but you are still "dirty." This is a really good poem and I like it a whole lot. When you thihk about it, or maybe I'm thinking too hard about this, but when your face dries, the residue of tears are still on your face. This is a heavy poem.

You have a gift, your a good poet,
keep it up,

[~lacie~] 5/5