How could you enjoy this demented scene,
Fading colors, shaded with puke green,

^^ Wowie. That was a strong beginning. "puke green" really stood out. Great description. :]

Clouds hovering above look dead,
Dripping fluorescent raindrops of red,

^^ It just gets better. o.o I'm already in love with this poem. Your imagrey is just... breathtaking. I mean you've managed to describe horrible scenes in a very beautiful way.

Only two colors now show on it's face,
White with black creating a new trace,
Showing its greatest image at last,
A life once viewed, that has become the past.

^^ Amazing ending.

Wow, I'm really pretty speechless. I loved this poem so much, there's nothing I can criticize.

*is nominating it*

Keep writing!
Cayce