Life carries on

by Shinobi   Mar 24, 2008


After all the pain my heart went through
All those moments I suffered because of you
Tears crashed upon cold floor from sunset to dawn
After all those painful moments, life carries on

Was stuck in the black hole of loss for so long
With no way to exit the place, I do not belong
One smile to cover a thousand tears of pain
One cut to save my soul from deaths evil reign

Not giving up for the much inviting temptation
Running away is the last thing to bring salvation
Must hang on to the slightest hope before it's gone
Must remember for what I'm fighting, life carries on

Finally as we rise from our deepest depression
As we stand in the light of a brand new dawn
No feelings of pain, ache or aggression
The only thing to remember, life carries on

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  • 16 years ago

    by Thomas

    Heya, I've just read this, zomg, wow =p 5/5
    I like the ending of each stanza, finishing quite simply with 'life still goes on', apart from the second stanza, which closes with death and evil.. but since there is 3 stanzas that end in 'life still goes on' and only one that ends in 'evil' and 'death' it shows that life>death.. well thats how i read it =)
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    I've actually read quite a few of your poems but i found this was the one that meant the most to me, also, I hope that your next write is 'EVEN BETTER' than the last =p hf, great write, keep it up! tom ;p

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    This poem had a great message and a really good deliverence.The word choice was good yet basic and the flow was great.The beginning was incredible and very descriptive which I enjoyed very much but I feel like the ending was kind of weak.It was like you just got tired of writting and couldn't think of anything else.But anyways,I still give you a 5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautifully written. Very inspiring. Great write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautifully written. Very inspiring. Great write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    One smile to cover a thousand tears of pain

    ^that was such a beautiful line and this piece was just wonderful to read.

    The imagey you expressed with your words was flawless and truly completed the vibe of the poem for me and made it more of a joy to read. The message was so inspirational and filled with hope that I just had to read the poem again. The emotions were strong and filled with power which made everything you said clear.

    Well done *5/5*

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