As I told you before...this is awesome! And you know what? The same feelings displayed in this piece exist at any age...even MY ancient age...despite the fact that I've become numb to much of the pain that can go along with them. You did a wonderful job on this...and I wish you the very best of luck in your contest :)
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This poem is really sweet. I studied a new structure so I benifited something from it. The rhymes here were fit and good, the structure fit and the choosing of words took my breath away. Simply amazing, keep it up 5/5

Wow i love this poem...so beautiful! what a great piece of art!! fabulous ^_^.
you got a lot of talent. i like your poems. i'm gonna go look and comment on more ^_^

I liked it ..persionally for my taste it's too rhymy if u know what i mean..but when i read your note at the end i understood!..great job tho.
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Beautifully done my dear. You truly took the title and made it your own with this wonderful piece. The flow was just great and the words you used fit everything flawlessly. I could relate to the emotion of being shy and fleeing when you dont know what to do so this poem came alive to me. Well done in creating this piece. *5/5*

Interesting! i give it 5\5

Beautiful poem excellent well written thanks for your comment on my poem "City of Sin and Lost hope"

I like your work, really nice and well thought of. I like the rhyming thats perfectly times within the piece. Really nice work, keep it up