by Nightmare Fiend Mar 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Here I sit, stare nothingness through my tears, seeing nothing but a pain, |
by AJ Irving
This is great 5/5 |
by x Mo x
Wow, That really just took my breath away. The free flowing form was perfect for the poem, it made it seem deeper. I love how, in the first part, you talk about how painful the tears are. Its true, tears do hurt a lot. I love the end, how you say that you will get through because youre strong. Great write! |