Comments : Strong

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow, That really just took my breath away. The free flowing form was perfect for the poem, it made it seem deeper. I love how, in the first part, you talk about how painful the tears are. Its true, tears do hurt a lot. I love the end, how you say that you will get through because youre strong. Great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    This is great 5/5