Wow! once again your imagery so vivid. it is absolutely amazing what you do with words. I satnd in awe at the beauty your poems. I am very sorry about your friend and i have just lost a friend to a disease. So i know about the deathe of a loved one but the way you portray it. It is just... i dont know a word to describe it... but it is perfect... |
by Syn
This poem seaps emotion. i love it |
First off, the title really caught my attention. It is effective and unqiue. |
by Melpomene
I lot of emotion was expressed within this poem. It was quite deep and powerful. You held alot of beauty within this saddening piece. |
by SHYSTY23KO
Wow this is powerful! |
by Brix Ambray
I love it.. very emotional... |