Ok i absolutely loved how you entwined fig language! most people don't do that much : )

"I see the spirits of sunset retreat to the west"
^^ i love the image that portrays! the image of ghostly images trying to hurry away

"I want to roam the dark skies without fear of falling"
i pictured myself doing this and it was amazing : )

"I feel the kiss of the night wind upon my cheek"
great personification! it really worked and made you imagine it

"I understand the bittersweet love for solitude"
great descriptive words ! i know how this feels sometimes you just DONT want to be bothered!

"I say that everyone's a star in the right light"
some people dont realize this so im glad someone finally put it in words : )

5/5 girly wow very very amazzing i loved loved loved it !