Lingering in Silence

I love this poem, this is the second poem of yours that I've read and I am definatly going to read more.
5/5

I like this poem, escpecially this part;
I still recall
the lyrics to our songs
and even now, I wonder
why you didn't take your
It makes you feel like he/she left the guitarr because they will be coming back someday. 5/5

All i can say is... Wow... the way you wrote this piece was simply amazing.

I still hear
in the mists of slumber
whispered lullabies
from a childhood
I no longer remember
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this would be my favourite stanza, along with the last. i still hear lullabies from my distant childhood also.

it was told so well, like a story. and the ending was absolutely brilliant. the pain and feeling that you put in this piece earns it a 5/5

an absolutely fantastic read

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

This poem is very interesting! But i didn't know if those were the emotions you were really petraying or you were just making a poem to the five sense because you forgot smell but this poem is very cute and it flowed very well but i was just confused on the topic you chose to write about! 4/5

This was very good, i liked the opening stanza that was awesome keep up the good work