This poem is beautiful and a delightful chnge from the average formating |
That was absolutely awe-inspiring. Just gorgeous. It's so beautifully different from the MANY other poems that use the context of "I still..." |
by Nix
--I still hear |
by Blissful
This has to be my fave from the two because it just captured my heart with your first stanza .. amazing. Your use of repitition was effective in protraying your message and I loved how it fit the poem so flawlessly. Your imagery was clear and just inflicted different emotions in me. |
First off, I can tell you're a poet. I like the take on this. You made a situation into a music related, emotional, poem. Bravo. |
First off let me say thank you for that magnificent comment (its been praised). I took some of your advice and changed somethings in my poem. I bet it took a lot of time and I really appericate it. Second, yes you may use the Latin phrase lol. |
by Unamed
Aww!!.i love it!!!.it has so much emotion it is really sweet..this was my favorite stanze...... |
Ok i really liked this poem. i enjoyed the simplicity of the wording, yet underlying complexity of the emotions. |
by Kitsuneko
Reminds me of my mother. beautiful. |
Beautiful poem excellent job very well written |
I love the fact that you used like a music theme all the way threw the poem. and each stanza had a few references to hearing music or playing music. |
by Syn
5/5 a poem incorperating my favorite instrument.. flowed well. Very sad. But good. |
by Sandra D
Wow. just wow. |
Very good!! |
This piece is deeply touching, it holds equal amounts of beauty and heartfelt sadness. Overall, I enjoyed very much. |
This was very good, i liked the opening stanza that was awesome keep up the good work |
This poem is very interesting! But i didn't know if those were the emotions you were really petraying or you were just making a poem to the five sense because you forgot smell but this poem is very cute and it flowed very well but i was just confused on the topic you chose to write about! 4/5 |
by NinjaGirl
All i can say is... Wow... the way you wrote this piece was simply amazing. |
by AnCi
I like this poem, escpecially this part; |
by Pesamenteiro
I love this poem, this is the second poem of yours that I've read and I am definatly going to read more. |