OMG. like, no joke. that's amazing. i do think you should change the title to the one you said in your message..i think it fits better.

I'm screaming made up words and thinking jumbled thoughts,
In an attempt to master your air of such undeniable superiority,
But still unable to catch your heart, let alone your striking eyes,
My suspicion is confirmed: I will forever be under your authority.

^ this is seriously, just wow. screaming made up words...i understand that. they have so much worth, but appear so worthless....

honestly, great job. keep up the superb work

Great poem its sad,i hate hearing about stories like that.5/5