Dawn. what happened? what's wrong? i swear to god if you don't answer...

for my heart belongs to him
for now i deserve this dismay
this my internal punishment
for what i have done

^ you deserve only good. you deserve nothing bad...no matter how many times we mess up..the only thing we should get is forgiveness.

to be alone
i no longer believe in
god i believe in only evil

^ then i shall tell you, you are wrong. wronger than you have ever been....you are not alone. god is there..even if he seems far away...and there is always a fallen angel with you..you're always in an angel's thoughts....

hun, this is a beautiful poem. i wish i could say i like it..but i dont know if i like the reason for it. it's not fiction, because you don't write fiction. great job, nontheless.

Aww.. jesus, you scared me, girl!! don't DO that to me!!!

Its good, well done xx