Hmm this put a smile on my face.. it was calm.. peaceful as if you really did write this.. so placid

I love the rhythm of this piece, it is so serene, very captivating. I think that you expressed your feelings in a great way here. Simplicity of this piece holds deep emotions, heartfelt and beautiful.
The flow is good, too from the beginning to the end.
Greatly done.
5/5 from me