by guitarman
This is really good! |
by Sarah
Hey Dennis this poem is one of the sweetest...I love it! The words are amazing and the way you expressed how you feel is wonderful.... |
by Erika
OMG!! I love this one honey!! The imagery and word choice is amazing, I felt as if I were a cork rolling along with the waves. I honestly believe you write more creatively when you don't try to rhyme, and just let the words flow from your fingertips. Now I have a question. Whose eyes? :D |
by Jackie
Wow Dennis! This is both sad and romantic. The imagery created is stunning. Beautiful work as always! 5/5 |
by Lyssa
Omg, this is like...AMAZING... |
by jennifer
Hauntingly beautiful and romantic. I love the choice of words and the visions they created. |
by talesha
Wow this is beautiful! Took me on a journey to a far off place and back again, and left me wishing it didn't end so soon! |
by Diana
Oh this is amazing hun! This is why I need you to help me with my writing, I'll never come close to anything like this on my own lol. Truly beautiful! 5/5 |
by Jaymee
This is very beautiful, and though short it speaks volumes in so few words. Don't drown in there my friend, and enjoy the trip =] |
by Netta
THIS IS A GOOD POEM DENNIS... REALLY WISH SOME ONE SHOULD WRITE THIS ABOUT ME..... 5/5 |
by miracle
Wow i love this |
by MissMeg
Great job, it was beautiful! 5/5 |
by Confessions
It's Beautiful!! <3 |
by Rachel RTVW
A thought provoking piece. Nicely done. |