Comments : Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by guitarman

    This is really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Hey Dennis this poem is one of the sweetest...I love it! The words are amazing and the way you expressed how you feel is wonderful....
    keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Erika

    OMG!! I love this one honey!! The imagery and word choice is amazing, I felt as if I were a cork rolling along with the waves. I honestly believe you write more creatively when you don't try to rhyme, and just let the words flow from your fingertips. Now I have a question. Whose eyes? :D
    Love Erika
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Wow Dennis! This is both sad and romantic. The imagery created is stunning. Beautiful work as always! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyssa

    Omg, this is like...AMAZING...

    too much for words to be honest, it just pulls you in, I felt like I was really into this..

    good job, keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer

    Hauntingly beautiful and romantic. I love the choice of words and the visions they created.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by talesha

    Wow this is beautiful! Took me on a journey to a far off place and back again, and left me wishing it didn't end so soon!

  • 16 years ago

    by Diana

    Oh this is amazing hun! This is why I need you to help me with my writing, I'll never come close to anything like this on my own lol. Truly beautiful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymee

    This is very beautiful, and though short it speaks volumes in so few words. Don't drown in there my friend, and enjoy the trip =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Netta

    THIS IS A GOOD POEM DENNIS... REALLY WISH SOME ONE SHOULD WRITE THIS ABOUT ME..... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    Wow i love this

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Great job, it was beautiful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Confessions

    It's Beautiful!! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A thought provoking piece. Nicely done.