Very intense and great flow, loved the emotion flowing through it :) And no, I'm not just saying that because your my friend either lol

Intense.
I couldn't breath throughout your poem, it totally gripped me until the end. Good work!
5/5

Very powerfull words
this poem is one of the best poems i have read for a while.. i wish i could nominate it for the contest it wouldv'e had a good chance
10/5
you could make a song from this one :)