It's alright to go untouched by the sun
After all, it might miss me entirely
And here in the dirt house
I've come to love my dirty things
The dirty shapes, the dirty colors--
So many-- too many at first
But I'll never get bored
^This was my favorite stanza and I love the title, i think you did a really nice job with it and I am glad I stumbled upon it. Keep up the good work, an enjoyable read :)